Story 1 — Footy
A cultural experience: a traditional Australian sport, different from football in Brazil.
Today we are going to use your real Australia memories as our main material. The goal is not to make the story perfect. The goal is to make it clearer, more natural and easier to tell again.
Tell your Australia stories with better chunks for places, feelings, surprises, culture and special memories.
Choose the story you want to start with. We are going to keep your idea and upgrade the English.
A cultural experience: a traditional Australian sport, different from football in Brazil.
A place memory: ocean, surfers, coastal walk and the feeling of imagining yourself living there.
An emotional memory: your friend’s wedding, seeing her after 12 years and feeling more emotional than expected.
Which story was the easiest to record?
Which one was the most emotional?
Which one was the most difficult to explain in English?
Which story do you want to improve first?
These are not “mistakes”. They are original ideas from your audios. Now we are going to make them sound more natural.
| Original idea | Natural English | Listen |
|---|---|---|
| In Australia have traditional football. | In Australia, there is a traditional sport called footy. | |
| They call footy. | It’s called footy. / They call it footy. | |
| The game use hand and foot. | The players use their hands and feet. | |
| My friends show me. | My friends showed me. | |
| I need to saw and participate. | I needed to see it and experience it. | |
| They can't compare with our traditional. | You can’t really compare it to our traditions. |
| Original idea | Natural English | Listen |
|---|---|---|
| This photo is in Sydney, Bondi Beach. | This photo was taken at Bondi Beach, in Sydney. | |
| We walk in like a trilha. | We walked along a coastal trail. | |
| I can see the sea and the surfist. | I could see the ocean and the surfers. | |
| I’m so in love for this beach. | I fell in love with this beach. | |
| I’m feel so great there. | I felt great there. | |
| You can imagine you living there. | You can imagine yourself living there. |
| Original idea | Natural English | Listen |
|---|---|---|
| This photo is about a special moment. | This photo represents a very special moment. | |
| My friends’ wedding. | My friend’s wedding. | |
| I chose been there for her. | I chose this photo because I was there for her. | |
| We are best friend our entire lives. | We have been best friends our entire lives. | |
| Without see her in person. | Without seeing her in person. | |
| I can’t imagined I gonna be so emotional. | I couldn’t imagine I would be so emotional. | |
| I cried the entire cerimony. | I cried during the entire ceremony. |
Click the chunks you want to use in your final story. Try to choose 5.
Use this as your speaking support. You don’t need to use all of them.
Quick oral practice. Flip the card, say the sentence, then listen to the model.
| Pattern | Use it for... |
|---|---|
| There is / There was... | existence: “There is a traditional sport...” |
| I felt... | past feelings: “I felt great there.” |
| I fell in love with... | connection with a place: “I fell in love with Bondi Beach.” |
| different from... | comparison: “It was different from what I expected.” |
| I couldn’t imagine I would... | unexpected feelings: “I couldn’t imagine I would cry so much.” |
Don’t try to understand every word. Listen for phrases you could use to tell your own Australia stories.
First listen for the general idea. Then listen again and catch phrases about feelings, surprise and culture.
What is the main idea?
| Listen for... | Notes |
|---|---|
| 1 phrase about feelings | |
| 1 phrase about Australian culture | |
| 1 phrase you can reuse |
Was this similar to what you experienced in Australia?
Which phrase could you use in your own story?
Speaker 1: So, now that you’re back from Australia, what was different from what you expected?
Speaker 2: A lot of things, honestly. I expected to enjoy the places, but I didn’t expect to feel so connected to them.
Speaker 1: Was there one place you fell in love with?
Speaker 2: Definitely Bondi Beach. We walked along the coast, and I could see the ocean and the surfers. I could imagine myself living there.
Speaker 1: And what about culture? Did you learn anything new?
Speaker 2: Yes. I learned about footy. There is a traditional sport in Australia called footy, and you can’t really compare it to football in Brazil.
Speaker 1: What was the most emotional part?
Speaker 2: My friend’s wedding. I couldn’t imagine I would cry so much. I was just happy to be there for her.
Choose one memory and tell it again. Use at least 5 upgraded phrases from the lesson.
Tell the story of the first time you watched footy. Explain what it is, why your friends showed it to you and how it was different from football in Brazil.
Use this as inspiration, not as something to memorize.
You already told the story. Now you are just telling a better version.
Choose one of the same 3 stories and record it again using these 4 phrases:
Use this structure if you want:
This section is for class management. Use it if you want a quick map during the lesson.